This is the screenplay, it was a collaborative group effort. Changes were made according to the resources we had
The cross cut kept but instead we had other characters + extra do the trading because we felt turning the angle would feel to slow
Scene 1: Principal + Cross cut
Camera slow dollies through hole of chair with principal on right side and ppt on the board
(clock ticking)
*Camera medium close up to principals face
PRINCIPAL
There are far too many drugs at school!
*Extreme close up to principal’s eyes
PRINCIPAL (angry)
we need to find out
*Camera POV slowly dollies to a turn at back of the school
(tense escalating cliche sound effect starts)
*Extreme close up to principals lips
PRINCIPAL (beyond mad)
WHO IS SELLING THE DRUGS?!
*cut to POV Camera reveals Man in black hoodie with sunglasses
BOBBY HASSAN
(Smiles ominously)
(Opens left half of jacket to reveal weed and poses with other hand)
Scene 2: Car Scene
Drone shot from above follows jimny into school.
*POV of escobar
OM DIMAS
Ok lets go
*Dashcam view
Esocbar gets off car
*Medium shot from behind car
Escobar goes to the back of car to open the boot
*Shoulder shot
Looking at a bag of WEED
*Shot from the pov of weed
JR and MT appears beside Escobar and all three look at each other
*Different close up shots of drugs being sold
We decided song should start after because it was too distracting and didn't mesh well. We ended up using this principal speech(outvoted)
Alternative Principal Speech
-Song intro-
*Close up of PA mic with white background
*Digetic feedback
*Cut to close up of speaker in canteen
PRINCIPAL
[Clears throat]
*This speech is to go over the drug trades
PRINCIPAL (angry)
Listen up maggots. It has come to my attention that a certain contraband has found its way into the local schools. It would appear that a new Hip way for consuming narcotics has been created. Now, whether you snort it, smoke it or cook it in your little sister’s easy bake oven makes no difference. Drugs are drugs, and rules are rules.
While I dont believe that these “brownies” have infested our school yet, if i find any student with so much as a crumb of these “brownies” on your collar you’ll wish you had never been born. And if I find out who is responsible…
(pause/sigh)
This ended up being used for the cross cut during principal's speechDRUG TRADE 1
*Camera pans down from somewhere between ceiling to headheight in the canteen to reveal 3 students in a midshot
students look up at the speaker
2 students move out from behind the
Do gang handshakes and “trade”
Ommited due to time restrictionsDRUG TRADE 2
*Extreme close up of AC1 pulling weed from sleeves
*Cut to AC1 smiling from a low angle [as low as we can get or a funny face angle]
*Camera follows student on pavement in a midshot with cash in their hand as the main subject walking down the pavement
*Camera cuts to long shot with AC1 in foreground walking opposite direction and AC2 somewhere in front of him
*Camera cuts to mid shot following student with cash, AC2 grabs cash
*Extreme close up of drugs changing hands from AC1 direction
*Camera midshot from an angle following AC1 walk away
Outvoted the others, will be used. AC will be Bobby HassanDRUG TRADE 3
*Camera dollies as it turns corner to student sitting in a corner and consuming brownies with a bag of brownies, dollies out to reveal AC standing at the lockers.
*Camera cuts to inside locker brownies, door opens, becomes medium shot of AC, bags of brownies at the side, AC makes scrumptious face
*Line appears at the locker
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*Jump shots of brownies tradings
*[midshot] ends with the teacher, AC looks surprised, gives the brownies, teacher takes it from the bag and instantly eats it, walks away from the frame.
Completely cancelled due to lack of resources and choreographing skillsDRUG TRADE 4
*Cowboy shot of teacher from low angle
*Long shot of bored students
*full shot of tracking money moving from student to student
*return to teacher’s shot, teacher turns around
*return to long shot, weed gets thrown across the class
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