This post was a joint effort of all team members which shows the development of ideas for the movie.
changes were made over time in sporadic fashion
This is a group effort of the selection of possible titles
Possible Title:
El-Higho We chose this because it sounds cool and sums up the idea very well
Hijo - can be confused for action movie
HIGHschool - bland
Escobar’s Son - literal documentary
God’s Lettuce - too reggae/hippy
My Highschool’s Cartel - too kawaii
Doki-Doki Addiction Club - we are not anime
High….. School - bland, doesn’t work
New Drugs in The House - too boy band-ish
My Sophomore Marijuana Tycoon - too goofy for subject matter
Idea: High-school students “The Ayaz Cartel” selling drugs at school
This is the list of possible props we have outlined
Genre: Comedy Action
Prop:
Pandan brownies
Karimun
Durags
Daun papaya (papaya leaves)
Plastics
Kapur (chalk)
This is a list of candidate settings and characters names along with their actors
Setting(Jason): - School
Emergency stair hidden back alley
Canteen
1st floor Classroom
Characters:
Mario Jimney
El Hijo de Escobar - Gem
Top D - Om Dimas
Bobby Hassan - Jason
Muhamad Tyronius - Niki B
Javier Ratón - Tikus
Mr James Brown (Principle) - Mr. Benjamin
Extras:
Arva, Damian, Anra, Mr. Nick,
COSTUMES AND SETTING:
Main Ideas:
Sell weed (brownies, papaya leaf) (teacher involved)
Trade (inside class, back school alley)
Principle = enemy
=Rundown:
Principle warning students that there are drug activities
Car pulls up
Hoodie put on (“Livin La Vida Loca” starts)
Vibe to song, going to school
Montages of drug dealings
Title shot (Someone's bottom)
This is the first script draft produced by the whole group together
-Script 1:-
Scene 1: Principal + Cross cut
(Camera slow dollies through hole of chair with principal on right side and ppt on the board)
(clock ticking)
*Camera medium close up to principals face
PR: There are far too many drugs at school!
*Extreme close up to principal’s eyes
PR (angry eyed): we need to find out
*Camera POV slowly dollies to a turn at back of the school
(tense escalating cliche sound effect starts)
*Extreme close up to principals lips
PR: WHO IS SELLING THE DRUGS?!
*cut to POV Camera reveals Man in black hoodie with sunglasses
BH: (Smiles ominously)
(Opens left half of jacket to reveal weed and poses with other hand)
Scene 2: Jimny drives to school. Drone shot from above follow jimny into school.
*POV of escobar
Om D says ‘Ok lets go’
*Dashcam view
Esocbar gets off car
*Medium shot from behind car
Escobar goes to the back of car to open the boot
*Shoulder shot
Looking at a bag of WEED
*Shot from the pov of weed
JR and MT appears beside Escobar and all three look at each other
*Different close up shots of drugs being sold
-Script:-
Scene: Principal on the PA
-Song intro-
*Close up of PA mic with white background
*Digetic feedback
*Cut to close up of speaker in canteen
PR: [Clears throat]
*This speech is to go over the drug trades
PR[as angry granny-like as possible]: [school name] will not tolerate any form of drugs at our school. We will not become a drug infested school! Anyone! and I mean anyone I find with those filthy drugs are as good as dead! Mark my words you filthy animals, I will put an end to this! And when I finally catch you, YOU! WILL! FEEL! MY! WRATH!
DRUG TRADE 1
*Camera pans down from somewhere between ceiling to headheight in the canteen to reveal 3 students in a midshot [2-4th quadrant of frame], students look up at the speaker. In the 1st quadrant, 2 students move out from behind the 3. Do gang handshakes and “trade”
DRUG TRADE 2
AC= Ayaz Cartel
*Extreme close up of AC1 pulling weed from sleeves
*Cut to AC1 smiling from a low angle [as low as we can get or a funny face angle]
*Camera follows student on pavement in a midshot with cash in their hand as the main subject walking down the pavement
*Camera cuts to long shot with AC1 in foreground walking opposite direction and AC2 somewhere in front of him
*Camera cuts to mid shot following student with cash, AC2 grabs cash
*Extreme close up of drugs changing hands from AC1 direction
*Camera midshot from an angle following AC1 walk away
DRUG TRADE 3
*Camera dollies as it turns corner to student sitting in a corner and consuming brownies with a bag of brownies, dollies out to reveal AC standing at the lockers.
*Camera cuts to inside locker brownies, door opens, becomes medium shot of AC, bags of brownies at the side, AC makes scrumptious face
*Line appears at the locker
*Jump shots of brownies tradings
*[midshot] ends with the teacher, AC looks surprised, gives the brownies, teacher takes it from the bag and instantly eats it, walks away from the frame.
DRUG TRADE 4
*Cowboy shot of teacher from low angle
*Long shot of bored students
*full shot of tracking money moving from student to student
*return to teacher’s shot, teacher turns around
*return to long shot, weed gets thrown across the class
Credits placement:
Establishing shot, Regents school front with drone, Directed by Michael Gay, Middle screen.
After camera pan up, principles room, Mr Benjamin, next to principle
Drug scene 1, drone going down from 2nd floor, Regents Media Productions, 2nd floor
Drug scene 1, shoulder shot of radio, Gemintang, Next to radio
Car trunk scene, Baron and Niki, bottom screen
When car leaves, Dimas, on top of car
Bobby waiting in back alley, Jason, Bottom screen
Storyboard (Nikeh-niTbo keh kimoshi):
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